Adding the Drops

19 Mar



It rains splashes on my window
I am watching the drops fall
I remember the many moments
Many small moments of my life
Small moments that add up to the big finale, end conclusion

Moments come and go lazily by
Moments change my life eternal
Imprints on my destiny, for better-worse,emotions high-low
Surely the rain passes,the moments pass. Pause


10 Responses to “Adding the Drops”

  1. Uchenna March 26, 2013 at 11:40 am #

    Thanks for stopping by you all, and as always thanks for the encouragement 🙂

  2. Chee Chee Nappyroots March 25, 2013 at 11:24 pm #

    finally got to it….i like it…i thought there would be more after the pause but i guess thats it…lol….very nice poem

  3. claudia March 20, 2013 at 1:53 pm #

    i like the raindrop metaphor…each little drop sums up and is a part of who we are and of the way we go..

  4. Grace March 20, 2013 at 8:24 am #

    Love the capture of this fleeing moment, they sure pass so quickly ~

    And that last word. Pause. Great pause/word ~ Thank you for sharing ~

  5. Precious March 20, 2013 at 12:31 am #

    Thanks for joining the psalmist in declaring the Glories of God…Drops of Peace and Joy, Psalms 19:1

  6. Linds March 19, 2013 at 11:59 pm #

    I wish I could pause and enjoy things as they are. Lovely!

  7. N.O.J.B March 19, 2013 at 11:02 pm #

    Wow,you are getting really good! I like the way it ends with “pause”

  8. Victoria C. Slotto March 19, 2013 at 10:56 pm #

    You’ve expressed this so well. For me there’s something so meditative about rain–listening to it, watching the drops splash in puddles…beautiful.

  9. Bodhirose March 19, 2013 at 10:07 pm #

    Yes, all those many droplets add up to our lives. Very nicely put…and I love those cute little crystal drops in the photo…

  10. brian miller March 19, 2013 at 10:06 pm #

    there are def moments i would not mind a pause…rather than a hard stop…smiles. moments pass like raindrops…and as sure as the rain comes, it goes…

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