Looking in

13 Oct

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The desires within drive away the rest and stillness
They are hot and burning inside, and i sense them strong
Where have they come from? my imagination or the image
The image, the truest , purest, passionate form of who i am
Streams and currents of inspiriting inspiration sweeping the fragile form
Heart pounds rising, mind speeding almost numbingly and trance-like

Love, to love burns foremost, to be allowed to rule above all
The most beautiful and most powerful, that renews while transforming
Belief and hope wrestles, to keep the fire of life glowing…flaming
Firmly convinced of the goodness and  ability of all that is True and Light
Mastering the inhibitions is present too,some justified, others not
Some are welcome, others will pass, have to fade and be gone, Be Gone

Allowing the mind and spirit feast on images of loveliness, and truthfulness
Taking mental trips to beautiful and tranquil places the feet have not been yet
Musing on the only words that can speak calm to the disturbance and disorderliness
Quiet down in the Comforter of comforters, and seek the unequaled Presence of the Creator, of the Shaper, of God.


9 Responses to “Looking in”

  1. liv2write2day October 15, 2011 at 2:32 pm #

    There is a sense of wholeness and serenity in this one. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Victoria

  2. The Noiseless Cuckooclock October 15, 2011 at 8:54 am #

    fabulous word flow and fantastic passion in life, God bless.

  3. Seasideauthor Sharon Rose © October 14, 2011 at 9:39 pm #

    Very good and I liked the pace it was smooth reading and very emotional
    towards Him. Well Done.

  4. William Leed October 14, 2011 at 5:28 pm #

    Thought provoking and touching. Good job and well written.

  5. Morning October 14, 2011 at 2:33 pm #

    glad to see love generated to Godly love.

    thanks for sharing.

    Happy Rally.

  6. claudia October 14, 2011 at 12:27 am #

    the desires within driving away the rest and stillness…i like how your poem reads faster and faster from there until it ends in a smooth pool when you come to the part of finding peace in the creator…

  7. johnallenrichter October 14, 2011 at 12:11 am #

    Looking in… like introspection….. So very important to find that intense love there deep within, and you expressed it so well here… truly the important things in life………

  8. brian October 13, 2011 at 11:35 pm #

    nice..your verse brings a peacefulness…it is really well constructed and i enjoyed the read…a couple well placed repititions as well…uplifting in that last stanza…

    • voiceoftruelove October 14, 2011 at 5:42 pm #

      so glad that you all stopped by! Thanks for the encouragement

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